The walls of my room are brown and the door is white the a gray handle. The layout and space in my room is the most important thing in my room to me. My carpet is quite old and has some stains on it from the previous, but most of my bed covers those stains.Some of my clothes are squashed up in my small drawers and most of good clothes are in my wardrobe. They are happy to enjoy the predictable lives they have, rather than search for an exciting purpose in their existence. My bedroom is a hyperbolic chamber. well done kaden it does sound like your room. I go in, close my eyes, breathe deep, and the world goes away. I have my normal bag that I take to school everyday, my blue PE bag, my purple ski/sport bag and my old orange school bag. I am glad you love your bedroom! My bedroom is the second largest bedroom in my house, and in this description writing I will describe to you about my bedroom by my accessories, layout/space, color and furniture so here we go. Accessories, accessories are big in my room because I picked them personally and they were given to me as gifts but they are apart of my favorite things. Remington 7600 Thumbhole Stock, I would like to get a bit of colour into my room because at the moment it is pretty plain. So, now the walls. I love my room and I always will but it does have some bad thing about It but I still love it. Some of its correct. I love my room because it's mine. If you listen closely you can hear the constant purring of my kitten who is almost always a curled up fluff ball on my bed, you can also hear the random gurgling of the radiator and maybe the odd dragging of the paws on my midget staffy snuffling about for food. My bedroom (extended metaphor) My bedroom is a forest, heaps of clothes scattered on the floor is the undergroath. I cant find much bad things about your description writing. Firstly, in my opinion I think that this bedroom is the best for my kind of personality. I have a brown drawers to keep all of my clothes in. On the other side (the right hand side) there are 2 dressers a long short one with lots of stuff on it (my one) and a thin tall one with models on it (Jacksons one). Next time you can probably calm down by using the brackets. But I enjoyed reading this but you keep spelling "color" the wrong way it's "colour.". So my bed is messy, but in general my room isnt all that messy. I could imagine looking at the things you described. I also share the cupboard with my sister, meaning that I have the right side of the cupboard for my items. I think my bedroom is perfect my way because of the colors, layout and the design. I also have bright dots that include the colours of light and bright pink, a turquoise dark and light and yellow. Except for the Furniture paragraph. Along one wall has the three dressers. I like it because it has all my precious stuff. I am lucky as the sunlight peeks over the fence and smothers my walls with a bright, warm glow. Here, were creating a metaphor by saying a person is our home. like how you have used brackets. MY BEDROOM I have a couple of lamps hidden around the room so when its dark it makes this cool effect. On the far wall where the window is there is beautiful multi-coloured painting of a cow and in the right hand wall there is a small built in wardrobe with a mirror on one of the doors and on the other there is the same deep sea green as on my feature wall. I am going to take you on a virtual expedition through my bedroom. The cushions on my bed are very soft and have a sponge texture. My room is a pigsty it has clothes all over the floor, shoes all over the floor and of course food plates that my dog has cleaned up. Sometimes you cant hear anything because Im sleeping or the sound on my ipod is turned off. Most objects in my room have the same color either black, grey or white. It is a king single with 2 gold pillows and a gold king double size blanket, with the window next to it, so my bed and my pillows get soaked and thats always a laugh in my house for some reason. The ideas are great and relevant to the topic. A strange smell like no other. However there is only one change I can offer, that is a change of colour to a blue or a nice green, maybe even a feature wall. When I left my room I had my pajamas on the floor with my beanbag in the middle of the room. Clothes stuffed half in and half hanging out of the draws. On the board there is flowers carved on them. On the wall where my bed is place there is my name, the letters carved in wood and painted in pink with many forms of glitter, sequins and charms all stuck to them. Yes it can be very messy and there are times I cannot stand that mess any more so I tidy it. No i have to go and clean up my room. Mollys Bedroom I would also change the view. I love the way in which you used senses, This is great. It is a stationary calamity! Im honestly surprised that its still hanging on to the wall and not falling, judging by all the weight its carrying. Now to the TV, it's too big! Good description Annie. Two clocks that are big and annoying, a computer that is big and fun and lamp that is bright, speakers that are loud and white curtains white and a mirror that is big. Your lucky that it's big haha 4. You used a lot of adjectives and nouns I could easily picture your room. My room has a hint of rotten food in it to make sure my sister will stay out and it has smelly clothes all over the floor. 036-536 88 75. We're i can't use it when i'm in my bed! The lamp rests on a stack of six books that are all ever so slightly faded because of the direct sunlight that streams in all day long through the window. I like the vocabulary you used to describe your story like vibrant, large, silk, chilled. At the back of my room there is a large window exposing the magnificent mountains covered in a blanket of snow, my other window gives a happy view of a fence which we share with our neighbour. It can survive an entire month of cleanliness before succumbing to the fall of clothes and chocolate wrappers. Im proud to call it mine. You could add more information on the accessories in your room. Next to my desk is a black and white Beanbag chair where I sit when Im either reading or watching Netflix. You may find me laying there reading a book in the natural light coming through my window, which is my main source of light. Bridget did omit to describe how tidy she and her sisters fail to keep the room which adds to the overall impression that the space is more crowded than it actually is. And I have also got speakers, lunch boxes, books, trophies, trays, tech projects and other things. I really enjoyed this story. If I got to change my room I wouldnt change it because I think my room is the best for me and I like it just the way it is. Its got a squishy top. It is my favourite part of my house because I can do what I like in there, and yet not get disturbed. Very well detailed with accessories and colours. cock is life. On my shelf there are wooden airplanes that I have designed and made with my granddad that can tell you I like woodwork. My duvet is light blue with spots that are light pink, dark pink, turquoise and white.My bed is a king single and I find that it is a very convenient size. There are three brass coloured wall lamps scattered around the room that have been pulled out their sockets and painted under, there are small clusters of hooks and hangers ready for decoration like a wonderful poster and a few of my creations from school. David Silverman Simpsons Net Worth, Even though my room hasnt got much in it, my room is the tidiest bedroom there. THOMASS BEDROOM Don't even get me started on my desk it's hardly a desk anymore it's just for storage.anything my mum tells me to pick up off the floor I most of the time just chuck it to the top of my desk or in the three sequenced in size draws that I can no longer hardly open because there full of unneeded nonsense already. Well, kind of - there isnt a set theme but there is a lot of stuff from the beach. To say your home is a safety blanket is to relate it to the characteristics of safety blankets: they make you feel comforted, safe, and protected from the world. The Mess, it's the first thing you see when you walk in, it's everywhere you pretty much have to swim through it all just to get to my bed because it's all covered in clothes that I've worn for the past week and can't be bothered walking the 20 meters to put them in the wash. My mum yells at me all the time to give it a clean but I just about always manage to find an excuse to not clean it up. The biggest most horrifically untidy thing about my room is the floor. The theme is pretty bare with a white paint job on the wall and across with chandeliers with lights that can be dimmed or brightened. A retreat is usually thought of as somewhere thats relaxing and calm. If you have a brother or sister whos bedroom is usually dark and smelly, you perhaps might call their bedroom a swamp, too! My bedside table is cream with a draw that is woven and basket like. But overall my bedroom is to me one of the best bedrooms in the house. I like how you used a lot of description! You really described your bedroom and well use of words in your writing. Most of the ideas are elaborated equally. The bedside table is filled with tangled plugs, wires and even a pringles can. This seems to be a fair reflection of your bedroom. I would say 4 out of 5 for this. Before long, the divide between work and home is blurred, and you can even metaphorically call your home a workplace because they appear so similar. My king single is the comfiest thing I have experienced with the reasonably old springy mattress that's kind of like a sink hole when you lie in it. My duvet has many colours and matches everything in my room, including my bright pink beanbag. And the last of my accessories is the bulletin board. Now I have my wardrobe at the foot of my bed because it makes it very easy to access when I wake up every excruciating morning. I don't care what people think about it because its my own space. E.g pain main, Logan you had lots of spelling mistakes like you said flour instead of floor and 'i's not 'I' \. These are 5 words you would use to describe my bedroom. I like the constant use of adjectives, it helps me visualise the colours. What my theme is. A medium size room down the end of a long hallway. Relevance. My walls are plain white and the carpet is a nice, soft contrasting dark colour. My dresser is made of dark brown wood, with some clothes that hang out the drawers. My most special thing in my bedroom is my glowing dragon it isnt very big but it lights up at night time and gives a bright glow of rainbow colors. Hopefully we will get you some colour in your room soon. Its a good description of your room but could be a little bit better because of the spelling grammer. My bed has a wooden bed frame that comes up tall where my head is and not so tall where my feet are. The layout of my bedroom is great but i dont like it. If your home was a classroom, you might imagine that you learned a lot around the house. In your writing I have noticed that you need to improve the proper use of functuation. My black guitar leans up against my drawers and on top of my drawers there is an orange word that says Brave. In fact I love my bedroom it is the best. All Rights Reserved. Every room has accessories, even if it isnt a bedroom. A cool breeze drifts in from an open door or window. Overall it's ok but you repeat your facts. I think you edited the grammar well with making it make sense but there were a few spelling mistakes and no capitals for I So try using better descriptive words. If you were to say that your office was your home, you would be saying that youre always at the office! I have separated the metaphors on this page into two lists. The paddock sometimes has sheep in it. You could make some ideas paragraphs a bit longer. The sheets of my bed are blue black, white with a bit of gray for the frame of the bed. The color of my carpet is a creamy grey that somehow makes me feel more comfortable than ever. My bedroom has been personalized specifically for me because of my homemade bed, my sky-light, the colours and the layout. Its a room I am proud to call my own. I feel happy and comfortable in my bedroom, I wouldnt change my room but I wouldnt mind a double bed though. Its an old 50 inch Panasonic TV with a gray color scheme and a black outline and controls on the front. I agree with the carpet needing vacuumed, I've been telling you for weeks too. I also enjoy the way that my room is positioned and how it looks (when it's tidy). I have two windows in my room and in between my two windows is my messy bed which has a leather like material. Your spelling was mostly correct there were just a few words like duvet. Out my east facing window you can see the black and white calves frolicking through the lush green grass in the paddock and the different coloured cars zooming down Thompsons Track. When I sit in bed with my eyes peeking out of my blanket it makes me wonder if something scary is hiding behind the box. My PS4 is tall and black with a blue light going across it and it has a futuristic look to it. An excellent description of your room Meg. Beneath the mountain is a variety of my calves running in the evening sun. By my creamy white door there is a place where I hang up all my achievements such as medals, certificates and much more over top of that there is a glow in the dark poster I find that really youneek because it looks really cool when it's night. The fresh air circulates the room which gives me a sense of new and relaxation. When I look walk inside my bedroom and look out the window I see the big pine trees blowing swiftly in the wind and the bed just waiting to be made since yesterday. Last updated: April 25 2022. I also have my Xbox which is of the things I play when Im not doing anything. You could visualize your whole room.The furniture paragraph is very good. Can't see any spelling errors good job . WILL HS BEDROOM I liked how you added a lot of description, like about the wall paper. I think that your ideas are great, they describe your room well. A stout red beanbag accommodates a spot near the middle of the room. Like maybe a gigantic , SHE HULK!, or maybe not but I love my room with all those fancy accessories. I look up at the ceiling and see a spider in the corner. Separating my sister and I is a large divider, that holds all of my adored books and other well-used items. I have many colours in my room. When you walk in, on the left is a window and a desk, straight forward is a gigantic, wide window and to the right is my bed, wardrobe and heater. I have a window that covers the whole wall so you can see outside. Every morning I need to make sure my bed is neat and tidy. Also some of you words are slept wrong or used in the wrong context. In the wardrobe there are white racks the store blankets, and the walls are brown. Love Mum x. DOOGIES BEDROOM It was great because I could visualise some things about what it would look like. I usually put it on my birch table. Now let me take you on a virtual journey of my own bedroom. Near where this wall joins the feature wall there is another painting. Well done. In the summer it reaches a boiling point the duvets on the bed gets thinner and thinner and it gets harder to catch some sleep. I have a single bed in the opposite corner of my room. the spelling was great and I really enjoyed reading the of writing you worked on. Your vocabulary was really good, you used nouns and adjectives well. Personally I love my What a great description of your beautiful bedroom! Williams Bedroom The size of my bedroom is actually the right size. Outside if you are lucky you can hear the birds chirping because my mum throws bread outside for the them to eat in the winter months. There is a massive window in front of you as you walk into my bedroom. It is literally a big, black dust nursery because its elevated to nearly touching the roof and Im short. The bright stuff in my room are mainly the walls, desk and drawers, my room gets a lot brighter when I open the curtains because my windows are a basically a wall itself, but with a window that big everything ends up being brighter during the day and night in the summer which is a problem (even with the curtains pulled). I love my room and no one's going to get rid of that! Your vocab was well done and I was able to visualize. For example, a child who loves to be out playing on the streets but needs to be indoors by 5pm might come home and say: Its a prison in here! Hats and sports bags under the beds in the dark. On the left hand side is a bunk bed which has Jacksons (my little brother) bed at the bottom and my bed at the top with really messy covers. If you open the window the fresh air wafts in. R5, It is a brilliant essay. My duchess is across from my bed flat against the left hand wall. Another factor of how my room can look so messy is because of the creamy white colored walls! My accessories, make my room the way it is. 10 similes to describe a place. We dont need all these lights on!. You had lots of adjectives to back up your nouns. The layout of my room is made so everything can fit. This is a good peace of writing. I like my comfy bedroom because it is very unique to me and what I like. I move things around to make it look tidy. Normally there is a huge mess in my room. The wall opposite the door has three picture that me and my sisters had painted quite a while ago. There are loads of different earrings dangling off of a metal sheet, which is shaped into a dog. On it there are two pictures both a light green in background with pink and yellow tulips. In my family you don't get much down time, from playing sport to hanging with friends, so it's good to do nothing. Will someone help me solve the following problem. Dont sniff to much or else you will smell the dirty clothes on the floor. I have some great accessories in my room that can give you a story about my personality. I like the part when you recognise that your room needs cleaning and organise your things to feel much comfortable but most of all you are comfortable in your room. I opened the door, it creaked and made a sound like someone's fingers on a chalk board. you could add a bit more information. Well structured very big and descriptive paragraphs. For example, the metaphor of an industrial factory is often used by biologists to communicate the complex process of a cell. All Rights Reserved. In the corner on one side there is a small mirror and above it a poster of my name, that reminds me who I am everyday when I see it. It's not really the best looking room because it's really messy and has light pink wallpaper. It's the one spot in the house where it's completely designed by me. my clothes. My pillow has different coloured stripes on it and it is very soft and comfy. You were very descriptive when it came to what you liked about your room and what you didn't like. When you say your home is a swamp, you usually mean that its messy, dark, and maybe even a little smelly. My carpet, I like my carpet Dont get me wrong I like the light creamy color that gets me comfy, I like the nice pillow feeling of it and how it eases me to sleep really quickly. I like my room the way it is because I love the view and how it is laid out. I think that it is still also good to keep using basic words. This grants me access outside whenever I need it, especially if it's for a little alone time. Next to that rug is my bean bag which is blue with a flame on it which is also blue. 4. For next time you could use more vocabulary and try not to repeat words. Next time try not to use extra commas where they were not supposed to be. You have described it so accurately. Now I will tell you about the sight, first I will tell you about the pictures and posters, on top of my duchess there is a is a drawing about what the future would look like, I drew in year 5 my mum thought it was a nice drawing so she framed it. Even though my drawers, desk, bedside table, curtains and walls are all white. With its concrete floor and the temporary plywood walls. I have to admit though mum doesn't like the amount of time I spend in it. Just make sure all grammar and spelling is correct. I hope you can imagine my very much loved bedroom in your mind as if you're there at my house. With the pastel colours and gold coloured curtains, it gives the room a lot of light. This means I get most of the afternoon sun. Color, my room has color in the right spot my walls match my carpet the carpet matches the color of my beds wood underneath the mattress and my bed matches my dutchess. Your writing was amazing and I didn't find any spelling mistakes. Now, the layout. It was an excellent piece of writing. On the left behind the wall, you can see a lot of lego and a few book and also a bean bag. there is a tree outside my bedroom window. This is placed flush against the left hand wall and is filled with many treasures. Inside it there are many of my favourite pieces of jewelry including both Greenstone and Sterling Silver necklaces. My bedroom has 4 walls and in one large window on the south-west side. The style of your room to me is a dark and bright theme with all the colours and design. As the sun beamed into my bedroom, one of my signs began to glisten and reflect the light that was coming through the window. I could clearly see your room just by the way you described it. Lastly, my favorite item in my room would be my lovely old fashioned jewelry box. You described thing very well. Nevertheless your writing is lyrical, has rhythm and engages the reader. Write a detailed description of your bedroom as you left it this morning. The carpet is basking in the rays of the afternoon sun. JESSIES BEDROOM. MY BEDROOM Really good, just a few punctuation mistakes. There is clothes such as shirts and shorts mixed in with stuffed toys and shoes. Right next to my bed is a little brown, wooden bedside table where I keep my phone, clock and other items. Every room needs furniture to make it yours and in my room the most important piece of furniture is my bed. It describes your room well. For self fun and study. The Five Imdb Parents Guide, I am going to take you on a mental journey around my bedroom. Very descriptive and easy to imagine your bedroom and feel how special it is to you. In my bedroom the layout is the pain point of my room. The view in spring is amazing as all of the plants have flowered and the perfume of these flowers is often in my room. My duchess is across from my bed are blue black, white with a gray color scheme and black. 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